Hello Sir, maybe you would like to do an interview / review on the new Black Widow album? so far its getting good & not so good reviews (lol) as some people expect us to sound like we did 40+ years ago and i would like to put our point of view on this also

And before anyone says it yes i do suck dick and im VERY good at it Satan tought me

Clive Jones    clive@smackmanagement.co.uk  

Ewen

Please can you tell me why you go to other ezines and leave horrible comments on work that people that have worked hard on.  That is not the way to work if you are the editor of an ezine.  Grow up and act your age, I’m sure you would be unhappy if someone did the same on your ezine

Fragging grow up man.  People do use spell checkers, grammar checkers and people proof read too but there are things that sometimes don’t get picked up. Would you like people to go through your work with a fine tooth comb and tell you all your work is shite?  Give people the credit due for at least trying man.  Just because you edit an ezine does not make you lord high and mighty.  Instead of leaving arsy and offensive comments at least contact that person and help them improve their spelling and grammar if you feel you can.  Do something good rather than be a twat

Maybe I am just an awful human being but I don’t think trying is enough. Feel free to pick as many holes as you can in the god awful shite I churn out. All I ask is that people adhere to the rules of English & perhaps attempt to convey something about the subject matter. Nonsensical gushing is the last thing anyone wants to read. 

Also what is this? Please explain what this is : 
“In England we were in the grasps of the country turning to anarchy and bedlam due to protesters that were demonstrating because of an accident where a young lad accidently got shoot by a stray bullet from the police which tragically ended up being a fatality.” 

This reads like My First Gig Review by Kevin, age 8.

People trying to convey emotion is exactly what that is.  Obviously you have may never been to a gig with emotions running high.  We have a grasp of English because we are British, born in Britian.  I am not here for an arguement regarding spelling and punctuality but I am here to ask you to stop bitching on other ezines.  Constructive criticism is always welcome I must admit just don’t be nasty

Mani, if that IS your real name, I don’t much like the cut of your jib! In fact, as jibs go, I must say your one is pretty shabby! What say you?

Also I really hope Mani here has confused punctuation & punctuality as I have never complained about Grave Concerns in a temporal sense. 

all kinda hurt feelings up in this joint